Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Few parents hold the idea that daycare centres are the best for the kids of growing age. Whilst, others disagree and have an opinion that caregivers in the family, such as grandparents can better handle the children. this essay agrees that close relations are a good option for early parenting.
this essay will first discuss the merits of 'kincare', secondly will measure the benefits of 'childcare centre', followed by reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, there is a clear justification for why grandparents can take better care of youngsters. On the first place, it is just co-parenting, as they are with them most of the time so, they share practical and emotional aspect of parenting. Besides, children are very attached to their grandparents, which make them more comfortable being with them. On the second place, grandparents are experts in babysitting. they know the techniques of tackling with the child-related chores. For instance if the child cry, they well know how to make him calm.
however, Getting down to the daycare opportunity, this idea is attractive for various reasons. on the first hand, childcare centres are professional in nature. there is a well-trained staff. Thus, sending an off-spring in nursery makes him socially active. For instance, according to a survey, babies who have early childhood education, are more ready to go to school than those who stayed back home with their grandparents. In addition, they possess effective learning, reading, language, and numeric skills. however, it affects children long-term development. they tend to experience issues such as behavioural problem, minor illness, and stress
To conclude, for the reasons, mentioned above it seems to me that, although formal childcare centres are giving 24/7 professional service. however, it is highly appropriate for modern parents to go for an informal way of parenting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38047138047 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89335123483 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609427609428 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8937711149 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1052631579 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6315789474 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240226200056 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646657347852 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566773449991 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137702598028 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652816730496 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.