Do u agree or disagree with the following. Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use the specific examples and reasons to support your answer.
is it prudent to say that life at the time of our grandparents was easy ? Two different perspective emerge while meticulously evaluating this issue. one perspective answers the aforementioned question with utmost conviction whereas, others makes its disapproval evident by denying its presence. personally I have proclivity towards thought that life today is much easier than before. it is due to main reasons. First is sourses of knowledge and other one is availability of means of locomotion.
my grandmother-teaching in school was interested in research. To get a bit of knowledge she needed to read lot and to contact her guide she used to send letters via post. time required to get answer as well as solutions from guide was huge. Either waiting or finding solution herself were her options. today we can just google any information by using keywords only. Furthermore e-mails are quick ways to contact any person from any corner of the world. if she had this technology, she would have done better research in short time.
Secondly, In past technology was not much advanced, resulted in many problems although at that time it might not be big problem but if today after facing such situations we might not survive for long. my gandpa once told me that he must walk 6 km daily to reach his school and this route was passing by a small river. In rainy seasons he faced a problem to go to school. In contrary today we avoided this situation by developing roads and different vehicles. No student had to walk this much and miss his school. this simple solution eased our life.
Last but not least, in situations like natural disasters like flood and tsunami advanced vehicles like helicopter and boats are being used to help to sufferer. many other things like trade via Internet, discovery of computer as well as online banking avoiding long lines made our life easier.
after this holistic analysis hence in conclusion, we can say that our life is way better than our grand parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, in conclusion, in short, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93805309735 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72071382858 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625368731563 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8012720592 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0909090909 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4090909091 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22727272727 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127806345673 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356355450039 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357572586165 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0667932237133 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299637136557 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.