space exploration is a good way to improve our lives on the planet
according to the international reports, the birth rate is higher than the death rate now while many areas in the world are overcrowded. the population explosion is a result of this problem. consequently, accommodation is a major problem in crowded areas. the solution to lack of accommodation is building skyscrapers. but almost just wealthy families or certain people who have a high average earning can live there. the other part lives in slums or have no housing. besides, building skyscrapers cause animal habitats have been destroyed. certain animals are on the edge of extinction. And, natural resources are exhausted. although the needs of people are endless, natural resources are limited. supporters of this point of view think that humans need to collect and bring other resources back Earth by discovering other planets in the solar system. it is believed that space exploration can improve our lives on Earth by finding new planets that have enough essential conditions for life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... accommodation is building skyscrapers. but almost just wealthy families or certain...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 159.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23899371069 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86259573347 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672955974843 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1818565115 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4166666667 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.25 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16118936878 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438139318682 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987266009646 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16118936878 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.22 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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