You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information center. In your letter
Tell them how long you are staying
Ask for some suggestions for what to do
Find out if there are any local events happening at the time
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to ask for some information about the Tien Giang Province, where I am planning to travel to there at the end of Octorber. I will spend four days from the twenty-fifth to the twenty-nineth to discover everything at there.
First of all, we would be grateful if you can give me some suggestions about the accommodation and the restaurant. I will go with my family of two adults and two children so I need a room which have two bed rooms and toilet in it with the possible price. Besides, we also would like to enjoy the local so I need to know some good restaurants.
Besides, my family was known that the local government sometimes organize the fruit festival. Are there any events like this to take place at that time?My children always wait to participate festivals.
I look forward to hearing from you
Your faithfully,
Calla Balls
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eed to know some good restaurants. Besides, my family was known that the local gov...
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Line 13, column 153, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: My
...ts like this to take place at that time?My children always wait to participate fes...
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Line 21, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o hearing from you Your faithfully, Calla Balls
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, look, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 742.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75641025641 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7302876667 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0180225997 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.75 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150913368047 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580584887211 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442936844459 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800357988846 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291761029062 0.0580467560999 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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