These days many people prefer ready to eat food outside of their home rather than homemade food. Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages.
It is true that rather than consuming home cooked food, people tend to have ready made food at restaurants or cafes. However there are both positives and negatives of this development. While eating food outside has advantages such as it saves time and money, I think that frequent consumption of this food leads to health problems.
On the one hand, there are several benefits of consumption of ready made food. One is that it saves time of the consumer since most of the fast foods take relatively less time or no time to cook and serve as compared to home cooked food. Secondly, many canned foods are cheaper in price and because of that a person can save a significant amount of money. For example, Tim Hortons, a famous canadian restaurant, provides full meal of one time at the price of 4$ which is much cheaper than the average cost of homemade food. Hence, fast food is not only cheap in terms of money but also saves valuable time of the consumer.
On the other hand, there are some major drawbacks of this trend. One is that most of the fast foods are pre-processed and contain food preservatives in order to prolong the lifespan of the food. However, these substances are injurious to the health of the consumer and can lead to problems related to lungs, heart and physical health such as diabetes and obesity. According to a recent conducted at Harvard University in 2018 shown that 70% of the Americans who eat fast food on a regular basis are obese. Hence, frequent consumption of fast food has adverse effects on human’s health and well being.
In conclusion, consuming fast food rather than home cooked food has both advantages and disadvantages. While there are benefits such as it saves time and money, I firmly believe that fast food makes youngsters unhealthy and leads to problems such as diabetes and obesity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79375 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55523168898 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4875 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0589345088 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.266666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322955123519 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122187458265 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937300935786 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230704415114 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858241024731 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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