you have moved to new house and are planning to hold a party worried about the noises may disturb your neighbors
Write a letter to neighbor
Introduce yourself
Plans of party
Invite him
Dear Mr Smith,
My name is John and I recently moved into the house next to yours, nice to meet you.
My wife and I decided to live in London because we are starting a restaurant business here and so I am writing to let you know that we are having a house warming party that will be held this sunday. we hope you can make it.
we have invited 20 friends to come over and we will have barbeque dinner. also, each guest will bring one dish to the party to share. although many people will attend, although I assure you that we will keep the noise down, starting at 4 pm and finish before midnight. so, should you not be able to make it, I hope that we won't be disturbing you too much.
I would also like to invite your family if you are interested. we are excited to make new friends in this beautiful city and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
John Grey
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: We
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Suggestion: We
...s sunday. we hope you can make it. we have invited 20 friends to come over an...
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Suggestion: Also
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Suggestion: Although
...l bring one dish to the party to share. although many people will attend, although I ass...
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Suggestion: So
...ing at 4 pm and finish before midnight. so, should you not be able to make it, I h...
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Suggestion: We
...vite your family if you are interested. we are excited to make new friends in this...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 736.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25433526012 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10266422248 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635838150289 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2159526983 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170527277502 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690697436795 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0227902302629 0.0603063233224 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105688740726 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00662978051033 0.0580467560999 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.31 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.