In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
What is your opinion about this?
With increasing population density in the cities, the demand for building new residential colonies is increasing. While it is believed by many that new colonies should be planned in countryside, others argue to save the countryside from converting it into a concrete jungle. In my opinion, I believe that new homes should be set up in countryside to take off pressure from cities.
To begin with, major metropolitan cities around the world are overcrowded and already suffering from vast migration of people from the countryside in order to find better jobs and educational opportunities. To overcome this congestion and to stop cities from becoming chock a block, it is prudent to expand cities outwards to relieve the pressure from them. For instance, The Chinese government has planned to invest million dollars to create new cities in the countryside to take pressure off from Shanghai, which is the biggest port city in China, and a city of opportunities.
Moreover, building accommodations in the suburbs or the countryside, will bring development to these neglected areas. As, more population shifts there, new industries will crop up. For instance, with the rising population in suburbs, demand for transportation, shopping centers, medical care, and educational institutes would increase, resulting in the creation of business opportunities for residents. Hence, both the people and the government would be the beneficiary of this outwards shift. However, the environmental concerns of the citizens need proper addressal and initiatives should be taken for sustainable development while maintaining the ecological balance.
To conclude, the cities are suffering from population explosion and requires government intervention to create more smart cities. The new cities in the countryside would help take the burden off the metropolitan areas while bringing development there.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...hinese government has planned to invest million dollars to create new cities in the cou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, while, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59930313589 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14393470252 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536585365854 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3626585866 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.615384615 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217944237636 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835118477953 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503748363795 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13585476504 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694806096951 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.