city planners new designs include setting up schools, markets, and commercial places (like office) in different areas of the city. do you think it will help the city dwellers?
give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
To begin with, metropolis designers are planning the upgrade arrangement to separate the couple of areas from the city such as shops, business building and school. I suppose that this project would be better for citizen in some reason such as decreasing any pollution, yet another illustration would be stated here in more detail.
Undoubtedly, every people glorifying life serenity. Commonly, every social activity always turn daily life to be more crowded and complicated. To illustrate, in general hectic time known at 07.00 am, citizen ordinary do their busiest routinity especially like go to school with their parents who are companying and go to work for kind of employee. These are the circle habits every people often tackle non stop. In addition for midday and night, sometimes people go outside in afternoon and hangout at the night.
The experts have known about this phenomenon definitely, hence, they consider to make a change and hope it would reach the new beginning and happier life. They perhaps would divide the circle to some areas depends on their concern, for example education scope would be collected nearest home due to the children save are more priority than anything. Furthermore, they would be presenting the company estate which is the unity of business and financial field. After that, the sort of market would be more fit if located nearby the commercial regency as merely entertain the burn-out businessmen.
In short, the main purpose of city design expert is cracking society problem through reset every location, and so I stand to this programme to level up the goodness of citizen quality life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
... every people often tackle non stop. In addition for midday and night, sometimes people ...
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Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'collected the nearest'.
Suggestion: collected the nearest
...n, for example education scope would be collected nearest home due to the children save are more ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, for example, i suppose, in addition, in general, in short, kind of, sort of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14606741573 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55887210561 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65543071161 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5666638646 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0942985055421 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308415464957 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314626303492 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610072396401 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274759587627 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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