TPO-01 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.Use specific reaso
Over vast track of time, universities breakthroughs have revealed various aspects of education as an essential part of life sophisticatedly. however, some debatable questions have caused indispensable argument among academician, such as whether sports and social activities financial support are important as school and library. although numerous people subscribe to the sports and social activities financial support, I’m convinced that the more we examine the advantage and disadvantage of financial support for sports and social activities, the better we can comprehend its valuable perspective. In the subsequent paragraphs OR accordingly, I will expand on my opinion by providing some rule-based explanations.
The first well-ordered justification that stimulates me to hold this viewpoint is that playing sports makes person healthy and energetic to face the future challenges. At university it can be seen that many of student use much more of their time to study and focus on research. In this regard, they have to spent much more of the time on the computer. accordingly, many of them may suffer from eye problem or other physical disease. The only way of improving this case is to encourage them to take some time relaxing in sport. Furthermore, playing a ball game together is the best method to promote teamwork sprit. After a period of playing together, member may make a friendship and also find a way to solve the problem together.
Additionally, academicians and scholars have made a great progress in their recent researches that endorse the influence of social activity on quality of the teamwork projects as well.it is worth mentioning that social activities can help foster ability that student cannot gain during classes or self-studying. Moreover, the results of studies conducted by some forefront institutes acknowledges this hypothesis that social activity can help student to prepare their self for the future. Because the university is a small society with different people and this society not only is useful for the student in progress of communication but also is very suitable for the student future life. So, it is significant for them to take part in social activities with aim of lifting their communications skill. When students are forced to talking with others, it’s a great chance for them to make a new friend and express their thought, which maybe an opportunity for their future career.
Last but not least, is that the places provided for sports and social activities are in need of money. it is common that school spend a large sum of money to purchases updated books and facilities to fulfill the requirement of classes and libraries. however, finding a suitable place to play sports o hold social activities is always hard. take my university as an example, if I want to read a book, I can easily find a seat in the library, but if I want to run for half hour, the crowded gym will just me into upset mode. Therefore, requiring the same amount of financial support to ameliorate the condition is just reasonable.
The main conclusion may be drawn from this article is that financial support should be contributed to sports and social activities just like classes and libraries. To put it briefly, I firmly contend that by evaluating the merits and demerits of financial support for sports and social activities, not only it be recognized as an evidence-based hypothesis, but also it can be accepted speculatively.
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- TPO-01 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.Use specific reaso 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, briefly, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2926.0 1977.66487455 148% => OK
No of words: 563.0 407.700716846 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19715808171 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87110059796 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98711143501 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 284.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504440497336 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 919.8 618.680645161 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5944722927 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.217391304 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4782608696 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.39130434783 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188149942613 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562114400546 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523852677937 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115607540303 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498794441073 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 86.8835125448 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 10.002688172 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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