You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child.
Write a letter to the parents, in your letter
° explain why you would like the Job
® give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
• say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
Hello. I am writing to apply to a job that is advertised in an Australian magazine. Let me introduce by myself first. I am Seungwoo Shin who will be an exchange student in Australia for the next semester from Korea. I was looking for a house such as a boarding, flat or rent house to live in Australia. However, I found the advertisement and I assumed that it would be really suitable to me. This is because I want to save my money to live in Australia so I can solve two problems with one solution.
I have a late brother who was born when I was 10 years old so I took care of my brother all the time when my parents were busy. Therefore, I know how to take care of a child and hang out together. I am quite good at cooking so I can help you make meals. In addition, I have swum for the last 6 years so I can teach your child how to swim if you want.
I always wanted to go to Australia because I read and watched some books and movies regarding Australia, for example, Sydney and Great Barrier Reef. Thus, if I have a spare time, I would like to travel Australia to see what I have seen in books and movies.
If you have any further more questions and need to know any information about me, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Faithfully yours,
Seungwoo Shin
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| 2023-02-14 | ielts_tony | 87 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, really, regarding, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 252.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.15873015873 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43451329864 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7483652693 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8666666667 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18749857345 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545076337454 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465436705246 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098378134333 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035440225387 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.