Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities.
Does this situation have more advantages or disadvantages?
Some people think that it is better to work more than the normal working hours to earn more money, consequently, they left with little time for free-time activities. In my opinion, I consider that this trend would have more negative impacts on our health instead of advantages.
Admittedly, people can earn an enormous fortune by working day and night. In other words, doing extra time would fetch a significant amount of money which can fulfill some extra needs and luxuries for people. For instance, Steve Jobs, an eminent personality used to work for more than 12 hours a day, which made him a billionaire and successful person. What is more, this also aids in achieving professional goals because spending more time at workplaces would make it easy for employees to complete the pending tasks and targets which is otherwise not possible in normal office timings.
Despite these advantages, it has numerous disadvantages. Firstly, hard work without any enjoyment makes life stressful because when less time is devoted to recreational activities, then the level of stress increases and it brings various mental problems. Recently, a survey by Delhi university revealed that those who work for more than 8 hours a day and do not have any physical activity are more prone to depression and anxiety. Secondly, it is detrimental to physical well-being in addition to mind. The human body has its own limitations, and working more than limits could cause serious diseases such as obesity, headache, backbone problems and overweight. Finally, it negatively affects family relationships as spending extra hours in offices would create problems in fulfilling the family commitments which will ultimately lead to the divorce between couples and clash of personal and professional interests.
In conclusion, although there are benefits in form of success and enormous fortune in case we work hard and ignore everything, there are serious damages which it can cause to our mind and body which cannot be repaired. I believe that we should maintain a balance between both things in order to have jubilant and healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21929824561 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7505980211 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8159165904 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6428571429 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244833611401 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797215372592 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732030148602 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158769798345 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907176313968 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.