You have planned to study in Australia. You have sent a letter to a college, but you have not received a reply from college. Write a letter to the college principal. In your letter,
- you should give details of the course that you wished to do,
- say why do you choose to study at the college,
- say why you need the reply soon.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to you to ask about the admission criteria for overseas students. I also wrote you a letter last month, but I did not get a reply from your officials.
To embark with, I am interested in doing a Master’s in Public Health which is a one year course with thesis. Because I have completed my graduation in medicines in 2016, I thought that it is the most appropriate course to start a carrier as a researcher.
What is more, I choose this college because this is the world's 5th ranked university producing thousands of competent graduates every year, who are working all over the world. In addition, I am also told by my cousin, who is an ex-student of the college, that professors are very devoted, loyal and faithful to their profession, and college provides state of the art facilities to their students.
As another university in the town is offering me admission in the same course, but I will prefer your college to pursue my further studies. Therefore, If I am not eligible for admission, then I would not waste my academic year, as their deadline is approaching. I would like to request you kindly let me know at the earliest.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Maryam Khan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rse to start a carrier as a researcher. What is more, I choose this college beca...
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Line 13, column 351, Rule ID: STATE_OF_THE_ART[1]
Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
... their profession, and college provides state of the art facilities to their students. As ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, therefore, in addition, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80090497738 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78533159813 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619909502262 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.3645484873 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4545454545 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237922432955 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874998478271 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825873951037 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13568302371 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102463353912 0.0580467560999 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.