It is better for students to go to school for more than 11 months throughout the year.
Some people think that going to school for more than 11 months throughout the year is beneficial to students, while others do not. If I had to choose one, my resolute standpoint is line with the idea that studying more than 11 months has negative effect on students.
First of all, having a break for more than a month can help students improve their academic performance. Proper amount of break enables them to relax and recharge their batteries. When people are recharged, they are likely to put more energy into their work and studies. For example, when my youngest brother was in middle school, he used to suffer from fatigue because his school had so intensive coursework with a week break in a year and thus he had to study all day all night. However, when he transferred the school with 3 months summer break, he could relax and clear his head. He realized that taking a proper break could help him focus his studies more, while keeping study without proper break could negatively affect his concentration. Aa a result, he got straight A’s on his classes. Without this experience, he would have been powerless. Furthermore, in the case of my sister, when she was in high school, she often felt depressed thinking that her life became an exhausting routine. She spent the whole day studying all academic subjects and always went to school to prepare college entrance exam. However, she was not able to deal with her anxious and stress. Unfortunately, she involved herself in dangerous activities such as drugs and fights as a way to handle a lot of stress and strain.
All in all, the disadvantages of having a vacation for less than a month far outweigh its advantages. Accordingly, students can benefit from going to school less than 11 months throughout the year.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ess than 11 months throughout the year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81433224756 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58649151454 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579804560261 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2336923486 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.375 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335705467538 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113745852235 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14905787307 0.0737576698707 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.327789285386 0.150856017488 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129315004802 0.0645574589148 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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