The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The charts illustrate the average amount of various class of nutrients found in everyday food eaten by people in the USA, which can affect your health in a hazardous way if you consume them more often.
Overall, both sodium and saturated fat are the most common nutrients in dinners valued around 40 percent. However, additional sugar is the leading ingredient in snacks with 42 percent. Other nutrients are distributed almost equally in different meals.
Looking at breakfast and lunch, we can observe that these two meals are having almost the same average amount of nutrients mentioned, except for added sugar. Sodium and saturated fat are having a percentage of 29 and 26 respectively, which are nearly close to each other. But, the percentage of added sugar is 19. Furthermore, for breakfast, both saturated fat and added sugar are 16 percent, and sodium is only 2 percent less than them.
Moving on to snacks and dinner, we can see that the values are not the same. For snacks, most of the ingredients are added sugar with 42 percent on average. Other two nutrients, which are sodium and saturated fat are 14 and 21 percent accordingly. At last, dinner consists of only 23 percent of added sugar, and those other two nutrients are both around 40 percent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a hazardous way" with adverb for "hazardous"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...n the USA, which can affect your health in a hazardous way if you consume them more often. Ov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93488372093 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54379062443 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548837209302 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3558406462 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4166666667 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0567270371936 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0241261139866 0.103423049105 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299607001037 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0405382740076 0.15604864568 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313487973151 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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