Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school.
Do you think this is a good idea?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Students grade are an important measurement to analysis their performance. Grades also essential for the better future of the student. However, the idea of providing money as a reward is extremely controversial in society. But, I am agreed with the notion because it provides the student with encouragement for the study. There are several reasons for my view which I presented below.
To begin with, education is important for children development and also it is necessary for the children's own identification. However, the primary student does not understand the importance of education. Thus, for their encouragement reward is necessary. For instance, when I was a child I always feel overwhelmed when anyone appreciates my work. When someone did that I feel encouraged, motivated and repeat those work more. So, appreciation and reward is a good idea to encourage student for a better future.
Second, many universities do the same process by giving scholarship to the student. As a result, it helps the student for tuition fees as well as make a sustainable positive effect. Personally, I think that there is nothing to worry about. Because those students are interested in study they never expect reward and knowledge are important for them. If their motivation is in the right path they will achieve a better reward in the future.
However, the financial situation of all the parents are not the same and some student feels embarrassed because their parents could not afford the reward cash. For particular, in our country India sometimes children commit suicide because their parents could not afford their demands. Therefore, students also need to understand their parents' difficulty and demand the things that can afford their parents. Moreover, rewarding price student could misinterpret and misuse. For example, they can spend the money on smoking, drugs and excessive alcohol. Thus, it is the parents responsibility to care about their children.
To conclude, the reward is a valuable idea for the encouragement and motivation of the student. But, sometimes it can be exploited. So, parents should concern the advantage and disadvantage of the effect and try to do the best for their children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29096045198 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92629326111 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511299435028 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1283173087 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.92 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.16 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195994744646 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621750472173 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403176516566 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122405515738 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259017468064 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 58.1214874552 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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