Wealth does not necessarilty guarantee happiness.
To what extent do you agree with this statement ??
it is widely believed that money will always bring joy. Though it is true most of the time, there are various things that wealth doesn't buy. We will now see about the significance of being rich and the limitations of it.
A normal man has numerous aspects to worry about and usually many of them are solvable by money. if he has the capacity to spend, then he would easily do it and fix the issues. Since he doesn't have the luxury of investing in each and every case in his list, he would be unable to solve them and make him keep worrying about it. For example, problems like inability to satisfy wishes of kids , gifting wife with costly presents, replacing a bike with new car, are all makes life easier, in turn brings happiness to the self and families.
Eventhough the points above will make us think that people with deep pockets are living gleefully, it's a myth. Wealthy men are not happy always. if they lose money in business, they will go into depressive state. So, it's all how everyone perceive things. When facing tough times, being strong and optimistic and striving towards success will make them forget the failure and concentrate on achieving victory, which will bring exorbitant joyness. The pursuit of happiness differs person to person and someone who is pessimistic and doesn't make effort to succeed will remain sad. Moreover, not all in the poor communities are without happy. A survey conducted by a research institue in USA revealed that rural population are more happy than urban. Lifestyle in country side is stress free and paves way for joyness.
To conclude, I agree to a greater extent that money is not something that gets you peaceful life. However, it can make life easy to some level, but with that comes a lot of other complications. The one who balances his life well will live a happy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7306501548 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36440502909 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634674922601 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.6472685951 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4210526316 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52631578947 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0648197853824 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0191936054302 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357436784035 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0429128183549 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295247516272 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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