A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter
Describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team
Simmarise the benefits of paying for the concerts
Say how you think the company should spend the money
Dear company accountant,
I have heard that your company is seeking for feedback about the way of support for my hometown. Both sponsorship on youth sports team and concert fee are beneficial to local residents, but I insist helping children's soccer or basketball team because it will bring more value.
To begin with, when people can enter the concert for free, it would definitely enhance their well-being life. people can experience various culture and arts through the events.However, unfortunately, a majority of parents are not able to attend the event very often due to their workload. Without guardian, there is less possibility that young people visit the concert on their own.
In contrast, offering financial support to children's sport team will satisfy more families. Each sport team hires managers and a coach, so that it facilitate joining a sport team. Also, affluent fund would encourage more types of sports team; young people would have more opportunity to experience more exercises.
In order to help local sport team, I suggest you to ask them to bring receipts then pay back the expense later. some people may misuse your offering when they receive money or gift card in front, so gathering some proof for expenses prevent them to use the fund wrongly.
Regards,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...finitely enhance their well-being life. people can experience various culture and arts...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...ous culture and arts through the events.However, unfortunately, a majority of parents a...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...ceipts then pay back the expense later. some people may misuse your offering when th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, well, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27488151659 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57788540049 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649289099526 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.0720425738 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.3 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213313018206 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828688044751 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726616040792 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120914832616 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692754868694 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 8.37731958763 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 8.71597938144 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.