16/10/2017 You cannot pick your friend up at the airport. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter, you should
explain the reasons.
You should provide him/her with alternative ways to go to the hotel.
You should inform him/her of your plan.
Dear jeena,
I am really sorry jeena. I am writing this letter to inform you that I will not be able to meet you at the airport tomorrow, so you need to come to my house on your own. While I was checking the route to the airport yesterday night, I got a call from a hospital that my cousin got a car accident. As her family are on holidays, I am the only one who can take care of her at this point. She has one more check tomorrow, so I need to stay with her by then.
Anyway, taking a taxi is not recommended because it will take so long time to get my house due to traffic jam caused by a construction in downtown. The best option is to use public transit from the airport. When you get out of the south entrance, you will see a bus stop right next to a cafe. Not only for 101 bus, but you can also take 105 one. After that you need to get off from Robson and Burrard street. it is like 10 stops away, so it will take more than 20 minutes. Once you get there, you will find Serraton hotel easily. I will be able to arrive there by 5PM. We can meet at the restaurant on the main floor and catch up the stories and check tomorrow's plan together.
Regards,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear jeena, I am really sorry jeena. I am writing th...
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: YESTERDAY_NIGHT[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'last night' is used.
Suggestion: last night
...I was checking the route to the airport yesterday night, I got a call from a hospital that my c...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 311, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'bus' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'buses', 'busses'.
Suggestion: buses; busses
... right next to a cafe. Not only for 101 bus, but you can also take 105 one. After t...
^^^
Line 9, column 410, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...get off from Robson and Burrard street. it is like 10 stops away, so it will take ...
^^
Line 9, column 561, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l easily. I will be able to arrive there by 5PM. We can meet at the restaurant on...
^^
Line 15, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...omorrows plan together. Regards,
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, really, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.02127659574 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09146230584 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591489361702 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3229993873 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248291321535 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079633230575 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859188895497 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201894206579 0.12726935374 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481495008561 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 70.7449484536 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.74 8.71597938144 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.