People should never eat meat because raising animals for human consumption is cruel.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, breeding animals for human consumption became an awful business. Some believe that animals are meant to become a food of humans. However, I strongly feel that raising them for human consumption is undoubtedly a vicious activity.
Firstly, for the sake of proteins and calcium, tons of kilos of meat is being consumed on a daily basis worldwide. As a consequence, many animal species are becoming endangered and would vanish soon. Every year the reproduction rate of Turkey is dropping by 15% approximately and now it became one of the rarest animals found in the USA due to the breeding business. To illustrate the statement, according to the recent survey of Food Drugs Association of India, last year, approximately 40000 kg meat was consumed on the eve of New Year. To prevent the mass murder of animals, we should consider vegetables and lentils as a source of proteins.
Moreover, ruthless activities like killing an animal and eating them will not only set a negative example in front of children but also affect adversely on their psychology. Although youngsters are sensitive and blind followers of their parents, many folks purchase live chicken and dispatch it at home in front of their children that could affect their mentality. According to a survey done by the BBC network, many children replied that killing an animal for the purpose of consumption is inhuman activity when asked for their opinion on animal killing.
In conclusion, due to the heavy consumption of meat and the adverse effect of killing animals at home on children's mind, I believe that animals should not be raised for eating purpose.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
...elieve that animals are meant to become a food of humans. However, I strongly feel tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, moreover, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06296296296 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7668054901 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8071546051 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.916666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206339983477 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794006119752 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673956214855 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145795973561 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637698378593 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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