A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they
enter college.
In all actuality, I think there are bodies which are more experienced than any of us and of course
than the kids who are studying at the school level. And surely nation or we can say the authorize committee should
be responsible for selecting the basic curriculum of students until they enter college. Eventually, most of the countries follow this national curriculum standard to govern their education system at the school level.
Furthermore, every student should know the fundamentals of some basic subjects such as mathematics,
reading, English, history etc.learning these fundamentals are very essential for anybody to get success in any of the academics fields.For instance if a person decided that he/she wants to
excel in literature and hence not choose the maths in schooling and at college the person lost
his interest in literature then the person would not have the option to do anything else but
literature,if he /she had chosen the maths then, leading to various carrier options. Additionally studying some national curriculum proliferates the validity of the high school degree, because people know that they have studied the same course.
If not some national body then who would pick the alternative courses kids? At there age they aren't aware of what their interests are ?, someone who is inexperienced shouldn't be expected to pick
their courses. They are too young to make decisions about want they want to study whether maths or writing at such a young age. For example, if some students can pick the subjects they want to study but some take things very lightly and undecided which major they have to pick, hence there should be a national body to choose subjects at least at the school level. However Not all students may be
interested in the same topic, some may be inclined towards arts and want to study less science and related subjects and vice versa. Thus a person has a sufficient amount of knowledge of the subjects which they are not interested in rather studying it in detail.
Thus nation should incorporate national curriculum for students at the school level, which leads the students to various options in which they can excel. So it is essential that the government plan the national curriculum
in such a manner that there should be enough scope for all fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, then, thus, at least, for example, for instance, i think, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1955.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07792207792 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6216336572 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498701298701 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.130429243 60.3974514979 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.384615385 118.986275619 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6153846154 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 5.21951772744 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.97078651685 262% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27206263118 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119469046047 0.0831039109588 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886134734446 0.0758088955206 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101667143419 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880860252997 0.0667264976115 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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