Nowadays, the increasing amount of garbage (Waste) is a real concern. Why is this happening? What can be done to resolve this?
These days, the problem of proliferation of rubbish across the world has reached at an alarming stage which needs immediate attention. The main reasons for this are related to higher rates of population growth and purchasing power abilities of individuals that could be controlled by the implementation of some refined policies by the authorities.
To embark upon, the first major cause for the accumulation of wastage is the faster pace of multiplication rate of human beings which has attained a number of six billion. This is putting a lot of pressure on the natural resources of the earth by using more from these sources and producing numerous items required by everybody in their daily routine life. However, we humans are returning these items in the form of garbage to nature which is contaminating the whole environment and humanity as well. To tackle this issue, governments should try to control the population levels in order to curtail the consumption of unnecessary goods by society. As a result of less usage, the lower will be the wastage.
Another reason is the elevated levels of per capita income. In other words, now, people have more tendencies to purchase a wide varieties of things such as packaged foods, luxury items and so on. All of these items are wrapped in cardboards, thermocols or plastic bags which the people usually throw outside their homes or in a common dumping place. To resolve this in a better way, companies should limit the use of these unnecessary wrapping materials; moreover, they should recycle these at their own levels. Consequently, there would be an overall reduction in the percentage of such kinds of wastes in open spaces.
In conclusion, the issue of increasing garbage material on our planet arose due to population burst and high-income levels that could be resolved by joint efforts of individuals, governments and private factories.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 129, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'variety'?
Suggestion: variety
...have more tendencies to purchase a wide varieties of things such as packaged foods, luxur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13183279743 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85180545023 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617363344051 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.765182011 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.769230769 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141716714863 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443600328608 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036293403585 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849393603548 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190043291733 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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