Private citizens, businesses and governments play equally important roles in protecting the environment. Do you agree or disagree?
Thousands years of evolution, is destructed in few hundred years and one animal to blame is humans. Ecological balance plays pivotal role in environment protection. Citizens, corporate business men and government have equal responsibility in doing so. I definietly agree to the above statement and let's elucidate various prospects, where in whose level best management is possible.
As the say goes '' charity begins at home''. Whether it's public or domestic affairs, only humans can bring change in all institutional levels. Hence, civil responsibility lies on every individual at best to do or not to do any thing that have severe impact on environment. Non renewable fuels like petrol diesel etc., are already creating havoc by depositing huge amounts of carbon in environment. Usage of public transport in place of private vehicles, electric bikes and cars , minimising or totally avoiding plastic are some of steps to be taken for better environment. Planting trees, harvesting rain water, eco friendly houses are additional recommendations that can be made for changes in civil level.
Industrialists, corporate business magnets can bring institutional changes by adopting environmentally friendly norms in their trade and manufacturing activities. Heavy release of toxic chemicals from leather and textile industries are polluting rivers, other natural water resources. Once, rivers were had fresh water flowing in them are now filled with drainage, mud water making inhabitable for aquatic creatures. Thus resulting food scarcity to other dependent animals and further breaking food chain. Dumping chemicals and untreated hazardous substance into rivers are in the hands of business men to avoid. They can adopt manufacturing methods which are less burden to environment.
On the other hand government bodies which are on higher institutional level than other parts of society can bring drastic changes for perfect environment. Legislators and officials should impliment strict municipal laws for avoiding anything which jeopardizes environmental protection. Many states and countries for instance Kenya and Tamilnadu banned plastic which is inspiring for other countries and states. Subsidizing, tax benefits for eco friendly manufacturing companies and institutions,reforestation are some of methods to be adopted by government.
Nevertheless, it's collective reponsibility to give better environment for future generations. Our drastic behaviour have already affected ice glaciers and causing global warming, Ozone depletion. However, it's not too late for any positive change.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, nevertheless, so, thus, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2225.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.87071240106 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25022479512 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651715039578 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 707.4 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8983803306 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7391304348 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4782608696 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08695652174 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144778850013 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388405082865 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608196036855 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771614007143 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680974095313 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.47 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 78.4519038076 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.