Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children
I was wondering how hard it was to live in the 1930s when my grandparents were children? It is difficult to imagine live without wifi or any other device we have nowadays. It must be painful and also boring. my grandparents lived in a small village in the countryside. They always reminds me that I live in a live with so many resources that they think it is too comfortable for us.
Surely, it was during post-war period back then when my grandparents were kids. We were being conquered by japan at the time, which means that we could only shared limited resources after most of the food were being exported to japan. Even rice, our major food, were not enough for a family with four people. Things could not be worse if you could not live.
Moreover, wifi or even internet was not invented yet. People could not make a video call by a single tap and swipe just like us. they need to write letters to communicate with each others. Every single reply could take weeks compared with seconds these days. Or if they want to see each other, they had to write a letter to make an appointment and then take a bus to the meeting site. Life was far from comfortable in the 1930s.
Last but not least, the laws back then were not enough to protect the labor force. Many people died because of working day and night without resting. Besides, the priority of the government was trying to rebuild the army and protect our country. The safety of labor force was not on the list. The workers did not have the rights to speak for themselves if they were being treated unfairly.
We can easily make a conclusion that life was not easy or comfortable when seventy or eighty years ago due to imited food, less convenience, and incomplete laws. Come to think of it, how could anyone consider a life easy and comfortable if they could hardly survive the day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ys. It must be painful and also boring. my grandparents lived in a small village i...
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Line 1, column 282, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'remind'
Suggestion: remind
...village in the countryside. They always reminds me that I live in a live with so many r...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y think it is too comfortable for us. Surely, it was during post-war period ba...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, second, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51632047478 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32725715799 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551928783383 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1301278582 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1818181818 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3181818182 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.59090909091 5.45110844103 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216849176514 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642510786908 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808276305822 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119471072921 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358103211194 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.