Essay topics: Vaccinating children against preventable diseases is not only unnecessary but also dangerous.Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree.
Some people believe that preventing illnesses to kids by doing vaccinate is both unimportant and risky. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with this idea.
On the one hand, in some developing or poor countries, infectious diseases is a huge burden of the society. It has caused lots of death and continue to spread the illness to surrounding people. That is why the vaccine was invented to not only cure people but also prevent the diseases effectively. Consequently the vaccination has already shown how important it was to the public. For example, according to the survey from Cho Ray Hospital, one of the most popular medical centers in Vietnam, in 2018 showed that the rate of children infected with flu virus in Vietnam was felt significant from 50% to nearly 22% during a period from 2012 to 2018 due to the fact that a remarkable growth in the number of children vaccinated was seen over the stage.
On the other hand, we could not deny some bad consequences in the past due to giving vaccine to children. However, the technology in medicine becomes better day by day. Hence, the current rate of success in vaccinate is nearly 100 percent and only other factors from human or facilities can cause a failure and risk in vaccinate. To prevent that, choosing a qualified medical center with latest technologies must be considered by parents. For instance, none of failure in vaccination was found in Ho Chi Minh Children’s Hospital since 2005.
To conclusion, vaccine is the most important key to prevent infect diseases to the society and thank to technology for improving the quality of it over the time. Thus, the government should encourage vaccinating children to protect the society from infectious illnesses.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...at, choosing a qualified medical center with latest technologies must be considered by pare...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01034482759 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80078976462 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.2187885338 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.785714286 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173623268185 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612752397522 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553477137006 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105215882266 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269497439823 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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