Thesedays people can pay more attention to artists (writers, painters and so on) and give less importance to science and technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, entertainments are significant in our lives. artists like actors, musicians are more popular and they are close to the audience. However, I disagree with the statement that science and technology are less vital to the development of the globe.
First of all, there is a multitude of well-known artists who contribute to the work of art or piece of music for the world. For example, Leonardo da vinci is an artistic genius who has the aesthetic qualities of art. The portrayal of Mona Lisa is painted by the talented painters. Especially, a priceless portrait, this painting expresses the art an movement of da vinci. As a result, people could enjoy the beauty and the meaning and the implications of each painting at contemporary art.
In contrast, the world becomes more and more modern, the technology and science fields are essential for people’s life. technology equipment like a mobile phone, a tablet or the computer are convenient inventors which suitable for the busy life of each person. Steve Jobs is a perfect exemplify, who is famous for the smartphone he created. smartphones are innovated from the mobile phone and combined to some functions like take a photograph, send a message instead of writing letters. The discovery of a smartphone has changed how we keep in touch with others. Consequently, science and technology bring useful to people’s daily lives.
In conclusion, both artists or scientists are also importing for the development of the globe. Each of the fields brings for people the advantages and the special value.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1953125 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96684766353 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57421875 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4454036649 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.125 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117877821315 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388579472481 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431338777573 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785673563142 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321682428624 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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