Many business meetings and discussions are happening online nowadays.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that online business meetings and discussions are becoming common. Although this trend can be disadvantages to some extent, I believe that the merits are more significant.
On the one hand, meetings via the Internet can be negative in the some certain aspects.
Firstly, people may suffer from technical problems. For instance, the interruption of the online meeting can result from the low Internet connection. In some cases, when power cut happens, all meeting’s content may be disappeared. Secondly, some online meetings have very little expose to face-to-face conversations, which makes people encounter difficulties to convey and understand real facial expressions. Consequently, it is hard to conduct arguments and this affects the meeting’s outcome negatively.
On the other hand, online business meetings are a positive development for various reasons.
First of all, people work more effectively. In fact, companies can hold the meeting anywhere without gathering all staff at on particular place. Furthermore, they are able to share documents easily and quickly without printing out. Another advantage of online discussions is time and cost efficiency. To be more specific, people can spend time at home to enjoy the meeting comfortably or do other tasks at the same time instead of traveling to the workplace. Besides, companies will reduce fuel-filling cost for transportation, which leads to less pressure on employee’s budget.
In conclusion, despite the drawbacks that online meetings can bring, it still does more good than harm.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...via the Internet can be negative in the some certain aspects. Firstly, people may ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, in some cases, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66945606695 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14701655069 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619246861925 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0841139182 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6875 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9375 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.625 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220564860932 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077440774359 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811603007289 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12274544975 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536342140864 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.01 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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