Some people think the development of technology has made our life more complex, and the solution is to live a simpler life without technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today’s world, some individuals opine that the development of technology cause human life are more sophisticated and living simple life with no technology is a good solution. From my perspective, I partially consent to the given statement for the following chief reasons.
It is clear that in these day people overuse and depend on technological device excessively. This is due to the fact that technological device without difficulty to possess not to mention that it is user-friendly. As a consequence, emission from those device pose a threat to the environment so that people could contract relating to respiratory. Moreover, nowadays people do not communicate by word to exchange information as much as before. This is due to the fact that having wide range of applications supersede those conversation such as in workplace or even at home. This could lead to people could not express or explain their ideas or thoughts articulate as well as make a invisible distance to each other.
On the other hand, if our life without technology in this day, community will be old-fashioned similar to before Christ. First and foremost, information become more accessible owing to the appearance of the Internet. This is mainly because human are offered with plethora of contemporary technological device such as smart phone, table and laptop result in students or researchers easy to look for and update information for their study. Secondly, technological field have contributed remarkably to build modern development at the present. To illustrate this, according to recent research of Open University in Vietnam, in 2018 there was roughly 90% University established e-learning for student and professor to manage course enrolled as well as exchange knowledge.
To recapitulate, although the drawbacks of technology in human life, I am aware of excellent merits’ technology through many decades.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this device' or 'those devices'?
Suggestion: this device; those devices
...iendly. As a consequence, emission from those device pose a threat to the environment so tha...
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Line 5, column 517, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this conversation' or 'those conversations'?
Suggestion: this conversation; those conversations
...ng wide range of applications supersede those conversation such as in workplace or even at home. T...
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Line 5, column 680, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... or thoughts articulate as well as make a invisible distance to each other. ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44966442953 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20452229042 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607382550336 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0782984334 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199123477675 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651700179771 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692103023291 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127175977458 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482364510726 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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