Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
when it comes to the matter of enjoy and pleasure, though, there is differences between people opinion. in this regard, some people suggest that working only three days in week is more enjoyable than working five days a week, while others maintain opposite view and say shorter hours in more days is happier than working for long hours in short days. in my opinion, the latter point carries more weight. I will try to examine my reasons as follows.
the first reason that should be stated here is that all employees need high yield in office, field word, and other position. generally, developed country have a powerful program for their worker to be in position with high influence. being in such position need not only being in position of taking initiative, but also workers have to develop plan, make decision and so on. hence, all of these undoubtedly need to spend high energy and great time to carry out goal time.
another subtle point is that working for a long time in a short days during week have several negative influence on workers mind and general attitude in terms of illusion, violation and even brain malfunction. workers who infect with long exposure in front of monitor, working with vehicle, argue with people and so on, will indulge themselves in a world full of violation, contention, and even pesimistic life. finally, those worker can not become succeed in their work and will in result loss the chance to promote their bussiness in future.
Perhaps, some employees may vote for such plan of going to work only three days and by long hours on a vaguely ground such as spend much time with family, or establish another work. but working in this approach neither can bring huge time for spending with others, nor can evolve new carrer. so I doubt this decelaration.
in conclusion, taking all in to account, although working for short day may have advantages in view of some workers, there are more advantages in working for long day with short hours shuch as high rate of yield and avoid of negative aspects, presented abov
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, may, so, while, in conclusion, in short, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87042253521 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35129445159 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546478873239 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.1514652977 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.266666667 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324041280715 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949116563325 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111317466134 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191104290839 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838324426011 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.