More people today are overweight than ever before. What are the primary causes of this? What measures can be taken to overcome this epidemic.
The world is witnessing an increase in the population of people gaining excessive weight. This essay will outline a number of reasons for this trend and a number of possible ways to help curb the obesity epidemic.
There are several causes of obesity. First and foremost, many people nowadays eschew healthy food in favor of fast food. Given the fact that junk food not only contains high levels of fat and sugar but also may not provide essential nutrients for the body, the consumption of this type of food on a daily basis could lead to weight gain. Additionally, a sedentary lifestyle could be another reason for the growing population of overweight people. For instance, many people have jobs that involve sitting at a desk for most of the day, and they tend to stare at the television and computer screens in their spare time. These people rarely take regular exercise; therefore, they are prone to obesity.
There is a variety of measures could be implemented to tackle this problem. One viable solution is the imposition of heavier taxes on junk food. Furthermore, governments should run more health awareness campaigns which aim at making the public aware of the fact that fast food is detrimental to our health and taking exercise more is of paramount importance to maintain a healthy weight. Another feasible solution is to build more parks and sidewalks to facilitate exercise. These solutions would incentivize people to consume more nutritious food instead of fast food and spend more time to take part in sports.
In conclusion, the excessive consumption of fast food and a lack of physical activities are two primary reasons why people become overweight. However, I strongly believe that there are several measures, as listed above, to address this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06440677966 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63805051941 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579661016949 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4970539469 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175332592607 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609800377066 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043938142087 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112905623654 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175609841435 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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