Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Without the shadow of doubt, what we do during a working day plays a prevailing role in our life since we spend at least eight hours per day for our jobs. As some people may prefer to do only one tasks as their vocation others may like vise versa. Frankly I myself like to do a vriety of tasks during a day. In following I will delve into the most conspicuous reasons which persuaded me to put forward this idea.
First and foremost, a diversity of tasks can leave a deep and good impact on indivisuals mental health. This is because If you occupy the brain with different tasks not only it becomes active but also it prevents routin since individuals face a challenge. But by performing only a constant job which in the end changes into a habbit which needs no thinking, the job gets boring. An instance can illustarte my point. My father works as an engineering and he designs and makes specialized apparatuses for the company he works for. In different situation and different procedures the instruments they need changes relative to their need so my father has to find a new solution for that specific circumstance. This means he is always looking for innovative solutions and cosequently he behave in his day life with the same manner. Whenever we encounter any problem always my father has the best solutions for it which is only because he has developed a problem solving quality for his charecter only because of his job.
Another point that accounts this significant is performing an spetrum of tasks reveals potentials of individuals which leads to better job opportunities. When a boss finds out about hidden pottential of his/her employee, in order to exploit them, he/she offers the employee a better position. A personal experience of my life is a compeling example of this situation. I used to work as a technical supporter in a company and my job was only answering to phones but at the same time my supervisor asked me to gather some data about how our team was doing. When I gathered the data he asked me to analyse the data and informs him of the result but when he saw that I am capable of data analysis he found out that I can be a more valuable asset. So he hired me as a data miner which wa a huge step forward for me. Now I have a better job only because my boss asked me to do more tasks but with answering only phones he could never knew about my abilities.
To wrap it up, all aforementioned reasons and examples convinced me that individuals can benefit from doing different tasks by avoiding a lazy brain and exploring better job opportunities. There are other reasons that advocate the fact which are not mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 783, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'behaves'.
Suggestion: behaves
...innovative solutions and cosequently he behave in his day life with the same manner. W...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 60, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...accounts this significant is performing an spetrum of tasks reveals potentials of ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, frankly, if, look, may, so, as to, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2191.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60294117647 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66118264148 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514705882353 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5613513265 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.333333333 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90476190476 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185808504637 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587436212652 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591881253578 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129957379006 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045771199071 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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