in many places, new homes are needed. but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
what is your opinion about this?
In this era of globalization, most of the metropolitan cities are over populated due to increased employment which eventually has lead to rising demand of homes in urban areas. However, the only areas available for constructing houses are countryside. Often people argue that rural area of scenery are not to be used for construction while, others has opine view. In my opinion, countryside needs to protected from any damage as it is essential in environment balance and for animal habitat.
Nevertheless, if landscapes are not used for building houses than people residing in metropolitan areas become homeless and their survival would be in danger. As a result, the pricing of houses available in urban areas will upsurge due to the shortage of land to build more houses. Moreover, it leads to increase in unemployment rate as people are unable to live in the cities due to no place for accommodation.
On flip side, countryside are more essential to be protected, as it is integral part of environmental equilibrium. If landscapes have been removed to build new place for accommodation than the amount of carbon dioxide will rise in the surrounding atmosphere as no green vegetation are available to reabsorbs them and result into global warming. Furthermore, the survival of animal habitat will be in danger as reduced vegetation will create imbalance in the ecosystem. The vegetarian animals will not get enough food and they die due to starvation.
To recapitulate, globalisation has risen the demand for building more homes but it is also important to protect our landscape from destroying as it results in to increase global warming and herbivores animal can not survive due to cut green vegetation in the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17730496454 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06780220872 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8275072893 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.666666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227023297298 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787386890418 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493641446553 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137266188002 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255383126354 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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