Nowadays, more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face-to-face. Is this a positive or negative development?
These days, more and more people find using apps to communicate preferable when it is compared to socializing directly. From my point of views, this advancement is positive due to the convenience which has been brought to human life.
First of all, socializing online is essential for people who are always engaged with their working schedules such as bosses and presidents, because they can easily attend a conference or a meeting through a screen at their place. Hence, they do not need to return to their company for being in person for the meeting when they are in business somewhere. For example, when a company had an urgent problem that needed to discuss and the boss and his manager were overseas but they could control the discussion effectively by sitting in front of the computer and using Facebook or Skype without turning back.
Second of all, with respect to exchange students or those who are studying in another country, it is crucial to keep in touch with their families. Thus, contacting online will help them with this thing so that they do not need to pay for the telephone bill with high costs. To illustrate, Preeda, who is my Thai friend, is a good example of this. As she had been Ireland for her university study, she had not had a phone for her own., so she just was able to write letters to her parents . One day, Preeda could call her family on Zalo whenever she wanted since she had bought herself an old smart phone after trying to save money for months.
All in all, I believe that online talking is advantageous. Thanks to it, leaders cannot get bothered by turning back to join the appointments and students can maintain the touch with relatives although they are away.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 488, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...was able to write letters to her parents . One day, Preeda could call her family o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, second, so, thus, for example, such as, first of all, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69333333333 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44315512496 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613333333333 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.0036686361 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0839221656778 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367496573203 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442348983451 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634826066172 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056922838596 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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