Governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products. Agree or disagree?
In the salad days of millennium,most of the masses have a habit of smoking. Which cause dangerous diseases such as cancer and even death. To save the human life authority should ban these products like cigarettes and tabacco.I totally agree with this statement and in the successive fragments I will discuss some points in length.
To begin with,there are numerous benefits to people if government ban cigarettes and tabacco products because not only those who are use these products have a problem but also those face problems who are living with them,and the result of this thing is that people who do not use these products they also face problems. For example,in India majority of people face Asthma problem due to the smog of cigarettes.The another thing is that people are free from diseases like mouth cancer and lungs problems. Which are the main causes of death
Moreover,myraid of people waste so much money to buy cigarettes and tabacco products. That money they can save and use it for good purposes. Apart from this,if authorities ban these products then they can also clean their country because majority of people use these products and spit on the roads and walls of nations. Beside,most of the teenagers see their parents and start smoking so if government ban cigarettes and tabacco then they can save youth from these products as a result the country develop more rapidly
In conclusion, if authority ban the cigarettes and tabacco products then the nation can have many adavntages like the country will free from many serious diseases and people can save their wealth if these products will be banned
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, another thing, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98161764706 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55187316709 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485294117647 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.455909389 49.4020404114 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.555555556 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2222222222 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8888888889 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136011776818 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533666741626 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585809877578 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929482460619 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027759218637 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.