Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
these days, there is an ongoing debate between people about the upbringing of a child. While it is possible to claim that parents should focus on how the child is well-fitted in the society, others believe that he learns that by being among other children along with the study at school. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analysing both sides of the argument.
At the outset, there are myriad of reasons why an individual will think of teaching his kid a proper discipline and manner to be a suitable person for society before even entering into one. Most conspicuous one is that at an early age, a child can easily be mold in whichever way we want to, and moreover ultimately he needs to live in the society. Needless to say, it is important that he understands the culture of the community and get used to it to be one of the members. For instance, if a child respects others and helps others, he will also be respected and people will be available to help him whenever required.
However, another pivotal facet of these arguments is that without interacting with people and other kids on his own, a child will never be able to understand the manners and culture parents want him to learn. school is the best environment where a child can get chances to deal with other children for various purposes. Not only this help him to experience the interactions but he will also learn from mistakes and dealing with children of different natures and behaviour. Hence it is apparent that practicle experience is necessary to learn something new.
In view of the aforementioned arguments, one can easily conclude that it is very valid argument to prepare a child to be a good member of society, but I agree with the later argument that parents can teach him and he can observe other behaviors as well to reflect the same.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65749235474 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56112145661 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544342507645 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.676832904 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.916666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24331818083 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850939630997 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503242539775 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153269621601 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558962239832 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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