Some people are making new friends by using socializing network websites and internet
chat rooms. Some people say that this is a good thing. Other people say that people
should make new friends by face-to-face chat. Discuss these views and give your own
opinion.
Some individuals are of the opinion that it is good to make friends online on various
social networking sites and internet chat rooms. However, others are in favour of
making friends by direct face to face chat. This essay intends to look at both
perspectives. I personally side with the latter view.
On the one hand, social network sites like ‘Facebook’ provide a great opportunity for
people to socialize with one another and find common ground, before even meeting.
Online social groups have become fundamental building blocks of modern human
societies. They have a beneficial effect on our way of life. They increase our social
interaction and give us more ways to make social connections. Earlier our social
interactions were constrained by national boundaries, but now the Internet has turned
communication into a global phenomenon. Today, our network of friends stretches
across the globe.
On the other hand, making friends through direct contact is definitely better as social
media sites can cause more harm than good. People can make fake IDs and cheat
anyone. Every now and then we hear stories how girls and boys were cheated through
such sites and after months of friendship, the original identity of the person turned out to
be very different. Cyber criminals can hack the IDs of people and chat on their behalf
which may cause huge misunderstandings.
Furthermore, face to face friendship is better because it is a friendship which has a
deeper bond than online friendship. Man is after all a social animal and friends are
meant to be there when you need them the most. Online friends cannot be with you
when you are sick and you need a friend’s touch. Face to face friends are with you in
thick and thin and this can never be possible with online friends.
To sum up, even though the growing majority of the world’s population abides by the
social meme: “I love my computer, because my friends live in it”, I still reiterate my
opinion that face to face friendships are stronger and longer-lasting.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, still, then, after all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22807017544 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8308880872 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567251461988 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3944805595 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1052631579 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.38176352705 571% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286406878482 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904182937029 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774638947024 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749647853025 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664790455717 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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