Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is better to take risks and explore new things when you are older than when you are young

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In the history of human,it is the spirit of taking risk and explor...
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...evelopment and prosperity of the society,increasing the living standard of people and inven...
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...able to take risk and explore new things,there is a controversy among people,some peo...
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...e risk and explore new things,there is a controversy among people,some people hol...
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...ngs,there is a controversy among people,some people hold the standpoint that older p...
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...lder people are more suitable because of fruitful experience they have,on contras...
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...ecause of fruitful experience they have,on contrast,I prefer the young people,sinc...
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...ruitful experience they have,on contrast,I prefer the young people,since their sen...
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...ve,on contrast,I prefer the young people,since their sense of confidence and enterpris...
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...nfidence and enterprise and the positive attitude towards failure. To begin wit...
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...ttitude towards failure. To begin with,it is well-known that young people especia...
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... and they are willing to set great goals,sparing no effect to achieve them. However,old ...
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...aring no effect to achieve them. However,old people are accustomed to think too much...
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...to achieve them. However,old people are accustomed to think too much and dont dare to try new thing...
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...le are accustomed to think too much and dont dare to try new things which will defi...
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...d dont dare to try new things which will definitely restrain their creativity and...
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...ld people in the history. To be specific,Ma yun,the most successful business man in...
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...le in the history. To be specific,Ma yun,the most successful business man in China,...
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... yun,the most successful business man in China,construct his company in his twent...
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...e most successful business man in China,construct his company in his twenties. Unlike som...
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...ld business man who is very conservative,Ma yun put his main energy and finance on ...
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...ce on the development of online business,which is not considered as a promising direct...
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...ke such an important decision. Therefore,confidence and enterprise are the most valuable pe...
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...ields and taking risk. In additionally,no one can avoid failure during the proce...
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...aking risk. In additionally,no one can avoid failure during the process of expl...
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...d to be positive is very important. When encountering with challenge and failure,...
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... encountering with challenge and failure,old people are used to complain and be nega...
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...egative while young people always can be positive and reflect on the failure to ...
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...young people always can be positive and reflect on the failure to ensure they wi...
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...re to ensure they will not make the same mistake again. Take Edison as a instance...
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...the same mistake again. Take Edison as a instance,during the process of inventin...
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...mistake again. Take Edison as a instance,during the process of inventing a bibe,He fail...
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...e,during the process of inventing a bibe,He failed unaccountable times,however hi...
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...he process of inventing a bibe,He failed unaccountable times,however his confide...
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...nventing a bibe,He failed unaccountable times,however his confidence never waned...
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...g a bibe,He failed unaccountable times,however his confidence never waned during the p...
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...ven after thousands of failure he still maintain a positive attitude and finally he succ...
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...tain a positive attitude and finally he succeed. Thus,since young people are more posit...
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...ve attitude and finally he succeed. Thus,since young people are more positive,they are...
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...hus,since young people are more positive,they are more suitable. Admittedly,old peo...
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...ive,they are more suitable. Admittedly,old people have more experience which can o...
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... when confronting with difficult problem ,however I think it is the sense of enter...
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...rprise and confidence that play the most important role in the exploring of our w...
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...ng of our world. Based on the discussion,it is wise to think that young people are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, i think, in addition, kind of, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2306.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35034802784 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21289666518 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491879350348 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 733.5 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.0739939633 48.9658058833 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.125 100.406767564 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9375 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 44.0 5.5376344086 795% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163800434139 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610999944439 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468121303548 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119508169543 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297616833897 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 11.7677419355 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 58.1214874552 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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