You have an extended family and every year you all get together to go on a family trip for a week. Your uncle is in charge of the plans this year and you would like to suggest a place you have visited lately.
Write a letter to your uncle. In your letter:
suggest the place you recommend
describe your experience in this place
mention what you could do there
Dear Mr. Smith,
Greetings for the day!
Hello uncle. How'r aunt and you? Actually, through this letter, I would like to suggest a place for this year family trip which I recently visited with my friends.
Rajasthan, today, is the hub of tourists and there are so many ancient forts that are build thousand years ago. Along with this, the forts are decorated and well occupied with previous things such as ornaments of women and clothes related to kings and queens. Moreover, the Rajasthan is on the top listed by the World tourism industry to enjoy there time with family.
Here, I would like to share my own experience. As you know one of my friend got his Canadian PR, and we want to spend some some together before his departure time. Therefore, we select Rajasthan to visit and spend one week to visit all the forts present there. Not only we saw lots of traditional dresses there but also learn how to ride a Camel in desert.
If you allow us then we can do lots of things there such as we can watch puppet show, forts and Camel Safari, and enjoy their traditional dresses. Could you organised this year trip for Rajasthan?
I hope you like my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 93, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...re so many ancient forts that are build thousand years ago. Along with this, the forts a...
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Line 17, column 119, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: some
...t his Canadian PR, and we want to spend some some together before his departure time. The...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73708920188 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28395914924 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647887323944 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6437923678 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0714285714 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2142857143 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276241976556 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097078492559 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880508308948 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140804474161 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108600693507 0.0580467560999 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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