People in society work in many different settings, and for a variety of reasons. What do you think is the main reason why people have jobs?
As we see in human history, the main purpose of working is money. Or in other words, people work to fulfill their economic demands. In my opinion, there are two reasons for this, which will explore in the following essay.
First, as Carl Marx states, fundamentally, we like to live in society, and living together prompts us to make new requirements. Needs guide humans to work and make value for their selves. Although you can live without money, like ancient societies, and even get back to forests, but living in modern types of hierarchies, impose you to work and make cash, the god of capitalism. You need money for your basic demands like food, home, cloth, drug, and clean water. also, money permits you to satisfy yourself by a new generation of innate needs. For example, you necessitate money for buying a car or having a trip around the world or even drinking a coffee in one of those cold spring afternoons. I think that in our century it is not weird to say money talks.
Second, as a human, you love your children and it doesn’t matter, what is your religious or where is your country in our planet’s map. Surely, you have concerns about their future and their economic situation more than anything else. You have to predict their lifestyle, their demands, the rate of increase in costs and even the political problems of your country in the future. As an accountable parent, you must focus on saving money to guarantee your children’s future. My personal experience can be a case. One of my father’s friends bought a house, far from the center, about ten years ago. He bought his apartment when my father was losing his money on board games. However, at the same time, my father could buy a bigger one in our urban’s territory. Today, my father’s friend, Amir, can sell his house, easily buy one of my city’s casinos, and spend all night, playing Roller with his friends in his casino. But, for my family, the story is different. Those gambling nights can’t even buy one of that house’s walls. Providence keeps people working hard. You work and make money not only for today but also for your children’s tomorrow.
In conclusion, people work just for money and it has two main reasons, fulfill their demands in life and protect their children’s future. Otherwise, human loves to rest.
- agree or disagree 3
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- These days, people enjoy a lot of time away from their work and school obligations. Many people use this time to visit new places and learn about them. What do you think is the best way to learn about a place you are visiting for the first time? 90
- Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 464, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...od, home, cloth, drug, and clean water. also, money permits you to satisfy yourself ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 7.30242825607 246% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 22.412803532 245% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 30.3222958057 168% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1373.03311258 142% => OK
No of words: 404.0 270.72406181 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84158415842 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.04702891845 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68252887781 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 145.348785872 160% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574257425743 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 419.366225166 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 3.25607064018 461% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.51434878587 396% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 13.0662251656 191% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.124501184 49.2860985944 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.24 110.228320801 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.16 21.698381199 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36 7.06452816374 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 4.33554083885 300% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175469944626 0.272083759551 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562432725201 0.0996497079465 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533677182998 0.0662205650399 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134752177548 0.162205337803 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326334201278 0.0443174109184 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.3589403974 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 63.6247240618 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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