Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes or violence increase. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
We live in an era where people think that they are safe and criminals will be convicted to jail when they commit a crime. Unfortunately it is not what we think it is because legal system is corrupted and people who have power can get away with everything.
Majority of European criminal law is based on German Criminal Codex. Nowadays every country has changed criminal legislation based on people who have power and money. Police is an institution who supposed to help and protect society but most of the cases are unsolved and expired because lack of evidence. For example Russia where violence rate is increasing every year, innocent people are murdered and police can not find a offender because court system and police are corrupted. In these kind of cases innocent people are convicted guilty with a crime which they did not commit.
Inmates who serve their time usually after service find their back to prison because they do not know how to live outside of bars. Government should have a program or lessons how to survive real life after prison because this can decrease crime and it is better for economy. For example in USA Litchfield prison inmates can learn basic skills like how to cook or do your taxes. Rate of criminals who return back to prison has been decreased 20%.
There are ways how to lower a crime level in our streets but it needs a changes in criminal law and better attitude to deal with inmates after they serve their service in prison. After these changes we can feel safer and overall criminal rate will be decreased.
- Most societies has its homeless people. Some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money. What extent do you agree? 56
- In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many peoplebelieve that such a ban is justified.Do you agree or disagree? 56
- You have just moved to a new apartment.Write a letter to your friend inviting them to come to your new home. In the letter you should: • explain why you moved • describe your new home • tell them how to get to your apartment 73
- You are attending a night course in the school you are not happy with some parts of the course Write a letter to the school director about this In your letter you should tell what course you are studying what things you are not happy about what you expect 85
- Nowadays people are working too hard What is the reason for that What should employers do in order to prevent employees from this 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 425, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...le are murdered and police can not find a offender because court system and polic...
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Line 5, column 486, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...urt system and police are corrupted. In these kind of cases innocent people are convicted ...
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Line 9, column 294, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s better for economy. For example in USA Litchfield prison inmates can learn basi...
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Line 9, column 402, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...or do your taxes. Rate of criminals who return back to prison has been decreased 20%. ...
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Line 13, column 71, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a change' or simply 'changes'?
Suggestion: a change; changes
...crime level in our streets but it needs a changes in criminal law and better attitude to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28872622512 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7252955905 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3846153846 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0889064273747 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0327852905637 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292274980875 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582209245453 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0142556771915 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.