You have just moved to a new apartment.
Write a letter to your friend inviting them to come to your new home. In the letter you should:
• explain why you moved
• describe your new home
• tell them how to get to your apartment
Dear Annie
I’m just writing to to let you know that you are invited to my new house warming party next Friday.
I recently moved to North Shore apartment in Sunny Valley. My old apartment landlord decided to sell it so I wasn’t able to live there any more. He gave me three weeks notice to move out and I started to look for a new place straight away. It was really hard to find a new place but finally I found something which is suitable for me.
It’s a new apartment building in a really nice area. It have a two floors, first floor have master bedroom and upstairs it’s a large lounge with kitchen. House complex also have it’s own gym and a swimming pool.
You can find this building easily as it’s only apartment block in the area. I live in a fifth floor and my apartment in on the left side. You can park on street or catch a bus as a bus stop is just 5 minutes away.
Looking forward to seeing you.
All the best
Lisa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
Dear Annie I'm just writing to to let you know that you are invited to my...
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Line 7, column 62, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...ment building in a really nice area. It have a two floors, first floor have master b...
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Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... master bedroom and upstairs it's a large lounge with kitchen. House complex...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39010989011 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26992246596 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637362637363 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6728564165 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.4615384615 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200531356193 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675890576293 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048862427091 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119162132729 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438608782521 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.33 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.