You have just moved to a new apartment.Write a letter to your friend inviting them to come to your new home. In the letter you should: • explain why you moved • describe your new home • tell them how to get to your apartment

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You have just moved to a new apartment.
Write a letter to your friend inviting them to come to your new home. In the letter you should:
• explain why you moved
• describe your new home
• tell them how to get to your apartment

Dear Monica,

I am writing to inform you that I moved to a new house two days ago. Last month, my husband got a new job in a company which is a long way away from where we lived before. The long commute was making him really tired, so we decided to find a new place to live in. Thanks to the help of his colleagues, we quickly found an apartment near his new office.

it is a well furnished apartment in a six-storey building and it has a large living room with a TV and two cozy bedrooms. there is a large bathroom with a bathtub. that is what I like the best because I really enjoy relaxing in the warm water of my tub after a busy day at work. The kitchen has almost everything in it, such as the gas stove, the microwave and the washing machine. Another nice thing to mention is the free parking space. there is plenty of it actually so now we do not have to worry about where to park our car.

so if you have time next weekend, please come and spend a day with us. we can play tennis in the community tennis court and have a nice meal together. please let me know if you are coming.

Hope to hear from you soon.

All the best,

Jane

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, really, so, well, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.12280701754 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12516180833 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4146163693 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.6666666667 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145077693405 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445215124712 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485805226449 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899358638034 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481382016199 0.0580467560999 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.02 8.71597938144 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.25 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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