You have just moved to a new apartment.
Write a letter to your friend inviting them to come to your new home. In the letter you should:
• explain why you moved
• describe your new home
• tell them how to get to your apartment
Dear Jeena,
I am writing this letter to invite you my new apartment. it has been two weeks and all packages are moved now, so I think it is good timing to show you my new place!
As you know already, previous condo was so aged; insects came out from everywhere In addition, it was located far away from my office. it takes almost hour and half by bus, and it is waste of time and transit fee. In order to have better life, I decided to move out.
Anyway, I am so satisfied with the new unit. it is one bedroom, but it has enough storage and even shared locker room at the parkade level. Moreover, various amenities are offered for residents such as swimming pool, meeting room and guest room.
The best part is this apartment, Wall Centre, is located in the middle of downtown Vancouver. After you take off from Burrard station, take any bus at Bay 3. it is only three stops away, so you will see my building pretty soon.
I am available anytime, so just let me know when you are able to visit. I cannot wait to see you.
Regards,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, if, moreover, so, i think, in addition, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51269035533 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17095151549 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680203045685 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4056267515 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0833333333 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189343769787 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683896971685 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639024941443 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108253717907 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778851982712 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.