Some people think that instead of climate change, we need to find a way to live with it.To what extent do you agree or disagree
Weather is big factor while deciding to live in particular nation. People always look for very conducive environment for for healthy living. In the today scenario where weather is changing very rapidly and becoming very perilous .Survival is very tough in this environment. This essay will describe whether preventive actions should be taken or measures to live in this environment and agreement and disagreement to this statement .essay will also put light on personal view to this subject.
Climate is very vulnerable now and becoming a big predicament. So endeavours must be made to make survival possible. To begin with, person should focus on healthy living. A man who does daily exercise , and intake healthy diet he remains fit whatever may the climate. This is the best example as many people live together in same time of environment but some persons fall less sic because they are much concerned with diet and healthy living. Recently a survey has been conducted and analysed that 60% people are more healthy in same climate due to their healthy habits. Further we must focus on more controllable factors . To elaborate it ,one should focus to cleanness of surroundings as it will in avoiding the harmful effect. For instance aforestation and CNG driven vehicles should be promoted. Although all these measures will not change the climate and undoubtedly prove effective for lessoning effect of weather change
On the flip side ,i am very concerned that it is impossible to change the climate. plethora of factors are behind it. It is not the efforts of individuals that can make difference but also the government who has to do mass basis. It seems tough or a big question mark on the subject of climate change.
So i put my strongest view that we must join hands and fight with this predicament and rather we must make this planet conducive to live inspite of such radiant climate change
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, while, as to, for instance, in particular, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9875 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63822571905 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559375 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.2796149749 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122259935322 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389500742588 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344507098591 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081770915166 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290360870692 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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