In Britain,when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them.Sometimes the government has to pay for this care.Who do you think should pay for this care,the government or the family.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
Care of old people is moral responsibility of the children.They should not be considered liability rather should make them as part of the family.This is the life stage which require more attention and affection.Old people who took the shelter of old homes also needs to be taken care. So this essay will describe who should finance them,family or government.
To begin with,elders who brought up their children deserve the same respect and old age care like them.So family should pay for their all types of expenses like medicines and other related expenses.Parents invest their whole life earnings to educate children & nourish them,so in return,it becomes the accountability of the children to give them all necessities.Further more if the government has to take care of the old age then there is no need of own generation.For instance people also believe that there should be someone who can look after them when they will be able to earn livelihood.Even as social it is considered that generation should look after old age people.In addition to this when old age people will be taken care by family,it will be a great lesson to the coming generation and further will go on.
On the flip side,Government must finance for the care of old age people for plethora of reasons.Firstly people pay lot of taxes and other government fees during whole life from the earnings.So government must pay off in the form of pensions and medical expenses.Even more these people does not become burden on anyone so the government must provide welfare schemes for senior citizens
At last, according to my perspective, it id family who has to take care of their beloved ones and should sponser the funds for nourishment. Moreover they are the roots of the family and to be made strong by putting all efforts so that it sets an example for the coming generation.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96153846154 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98830856128 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532051282051 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.2975951904 305% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 273.69866642 49.4020404114 554% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 309.6 106.682146367 290% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.4 20.7667163134 300% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.8 7.06120827912 280% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405753624592 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205387297006 0.084324248473 244% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995625052377 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241808617355 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753710179625 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.1 13.0946893788 253% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.55 50.2224549098 17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.38 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.1190380762 265% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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