International air fares are falling and tourism is growing. What are advantages and disadvantages of increasing tourism activity ?

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Travel refresh mind and soul.In the burgeoning era, where people are wo...
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...eoning era, where people are working for ,long hours and under stress.So in order ...
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...orking for ,long hours and under stress.So in order To refresh and incursion,they ...
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...ess.So in order To refresh and incursion,they travel to different places frequently.S...
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...y travel to different places frequently.So tourism is growing at a swift pace.This...
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...y.So tourism is growing at a swift pace.This essay will outline the merits and demer...
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...merits and demerits of this approach. Increased tourism has plethora of reason...
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... of reasons for downfall of air tickets.To begin with, travel give opportunity for...
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...unity for exchange of culture and ideas.When variety of ideas will mix with each oth...
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...ariety of ideas will mix with each other,it would results in change of living stand...
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...ideas will mix with each other,it would results in change of living standards,thoughts ...
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...and different approach towards the life.Secondly,tourism will increase employment opport...
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...erent approach towards the life.Secondly,tourism will increase employment opportunities ...
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...ies to the people of destination places.In this contest visitors spend money on sh...
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...contest visitors spend money on shopping,sight seeing and various leisure activities.S...
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...t seeing and various leisure activities.So all these jobs will be managed by nativ...
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...by native people and it ultimately will boosts the economy of the nation.Hospitality i...
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...y will boosts the economy of the nation.Hospitality industry,foreign exchange department wi...
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...onomy of the nation.Hospitality industry,foreign exchange department will take the econo...
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...ill take the economy on developing path.For any instance nations lie Singapore,Duba...
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...h.For any instance nations lie Singapore,Dubai and Malaysia are heavily depend upon to...
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...ingapore,Dubai and Malaysia are heavily depend upon tourism business. Moreover this wi...
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...e heavily depend upon tourism business. Moreover this will help in maintaining harmoniou...
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... help in maintaining harmonious relation nations and would boost trade among coun...
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...and would boost trade among countries On the flip side,it has adverse effect t...
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... among countries On the flip side,it has adverse effect too,unwanted tourism...
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... the flip side,it has adverse effect too,unwanted tourism result in inevitable disputes a...
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...e disputes and conflicts between people.Moreover this will disturb the peace of a countr...
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...his will disturb the peace of a country.Legal activities are the result of movement o...
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... people from one place to another place.Even theses activities would create discrimi...
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...ould create discrimination among people.For an instance a survey has been conducted...
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... resources during natural calamities. In the end it can be concluded that alth...
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...gh travel industry has little draw backs,but favorable reasons overcome the same.Tou...
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...but favorable reasons overcome the same.Tourism must be promoted for the overall growth...
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...d for the overall growth of the country.Government must enforce policies to boost the indu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8475177305 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40858914446 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63475177305 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 70.0 20.2975951904 345% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 222.415714373 49.4020404114 450% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 412.25 106.682146367 386% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.5 20.7667163134 339% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.5 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11070919053 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577062206086 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388698653157 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0590385750784 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411742391741 0.056905535591 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.4 13.0946893788 316% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -16.49 50.2224549098 -33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.0 11.3001002004 292% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.83 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.99 8.58950901804 151% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.0 10.1190380762 296% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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