Essay topics: Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this
Export of the essential commodities is very imperative to any nation. any countries have abundance of the good while other have scarcity.Thus export will help in maintain the balance. To what extent ,will it be advantageous to the nation?. This essay will put light on the merits and demerits of this approach.
The exports of essentials is beneficial in several ways.To begin, export would be useful for the both the economies. because import economy would be able to fulfill the needs of the society on the other side export economy would get surplus income. Win win situation would be there for both the economies.In addition to this ,it would also helpful in controlling the prices of the goods.For an instance, crop of rice is produced in ample quantity in our country so we are sending to other nations and earning foreign income on it. Moreover if the excess is not sent to other countries it would be wastage of the resources.This would also result in maintaining balance in the economy.This is the biggest reason that now papaya and oranges are available in every season. Further more, this would result in harmonious relations among various nations.Even this would provide more employment opportunities because people must be aware that their material will earn money from the outside of the country.
On the contrary,this would result in deficiency of the goods in the exporting country. Although there would be need of good in the home country, but sellers would be more keen to earn profits through exports.Further more, this would be wastage of the sheer and rare resources which could be used for other motive.
In the end it can be analyzed that export of commodities must now a days to meet the basic needs of the nation and moreover to maintain the harmony and balance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, while, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9504950495 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7161696121 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531353135314 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.0288833272 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167771861906 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778506118872 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376394054311 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108998275212 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365880020452 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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