Every culture, throughout time, has recorded its history in one way or another.
In what ways can history be passed on to the next generation?
Why is history important to society?
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:107%">It is true that nation’s cultures are mainly based in their
histories. This essay will detail some of the methods to transfer cultural
values through generations, and will explore why history is a vital element for
every society.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:107%">To begin with, there are various mediums through which
historical knowledge can be conveyed to the youngsters, the most significant of
which is learning history at schools. This
is immensely vital because if students learn history as a compulsory part of
their curriculum, this would ensure that all students could possess the sufficient
historical knowledge of their country when they grow as adult citizens. For Instance,
in Egypt, since all pupils are taught about the history of Pharaohs, Egyptians
tend to have a great appreciation to their old civilization. Another significant method to communicate
history to the younger generations is through the older generations. This is
influential because the more are the old people keen on educating the children
about their national history, the more those children may become interested in
their history. </span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:107%">It is commonly believed that historical knowledge do have a
crucial value for the society because the identity of people is typically
formed by their culture, which in turn based on their country’s history. Although
the future of any country tend to be the main concern of its people, personal
values are frequently associated with the historical culture of people. That is
to say, nations who value their cultural values usually have stronger community
ties and healthier interpersonal relationships. What is more, when citizens
have better historical awareness and thus more appreciation to their identity,
they tend to have higher loyalty to their country. </span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:107%">In conclusion, schooling and older generations are two effective channels to transfer history to young generations. Historical knowledge can be very beneficial to societies in terms of strengthening the
community ties and raising loyalty among citizens. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, then, thus, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2365.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 7.21036585366 5.12529762239 141% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.55994344837 2.80592935109 234% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536585365854 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 173.374767484 49.4020404114 351% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 236.5 106.682146367 222% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 32.8 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 29.0 4.38176352705 662% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0870447198785 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443764535686 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444871776784 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0363504481427 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522221931952 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.9 13.0946893788 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.16 50.2224549098 10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 25.13 12.4159519038 202% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 34.0 9.78957915832 347% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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