Museums and art galleries should concentrate on local works rather than showing the cultures or artworks from other countries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Museums and art galleries have long been at the forefront of maintaining and reflecting cultural values and narratives that have been used throughout the years by almost all nations. Many citizens, though, agree that the museum will focus primarily on regional history and art, however, some think that they should display global culture and works of art as well. In this essay we will discuss and give reasons as to why museums and art galleries should display both local and international history and art?
Many denizens believe that there should be a local museum that honors the historical value of the country where it is located, as this will create a sense of patriotism among the people through historical objects that show the period of glory and struggle of their predecessors. Moreover, museums can also maintain regional customs and culture, since ancient designs, clothes and objects that are becoming outdated in the modern world can now be preserved behind the glass.
On the contrary, museums that display art and history from the other part of the world, they would demonstrate multiculturalism and enable people to gain global knowledge, thus not limiting with in the domestic borders. For instance, the Vatican museums exhibits the art and artefacts of several European countries allowing visitors to gain knowledge of distinct nations under one roof. Furthermore, museums often help people understand important international issues, as many foreign exhibits are shown on political issues.
To conclude, I strongly agree that the museums should put on show culture, heritage and objects of several nations as this will not only promote multiculturalism and improve diversity, but will also boost people's overall understanding.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, moreover, so, thus, well, as to, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38181818182 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73798140037 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589090909091 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.5832517938 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.444444444 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5555555556 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218893576765 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915139054291 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533087789319 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122587566088 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615770726279 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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