Students are more influenced by their teacher than their students
In the world we live in, people always affect each other. Some persons and characters are more influential and even very charismatic than other people. One of the most controversial questions among teachers and scholar is: Does teacher has the most effect on the students or the students are more influenced by their friends. In my own perspective, I think that students are more influenced by their teacher than their friends. Following reasons and examples will elaborate on my opinion.
First of all, students' age are lower than their teacher. There a lot of researches in which indicating that people are more influenced by older people. The older people's act, behavior and talk are more convincing for younger ones. Further, teachers have a tremendous valuable experiences. These experience are very interesting and appealing to students. For instance, I had a class at high school and as their teacher when I expressed and illustrated my experiences in my major field -civil engineering- some of the students interested in this field and decided to choose civil engineering as their major.
Second, students and teachers spent many time together, almost more than one third of a day. However, the students would spend less time with their friends than with their teachers. It is need lees to say that, people always affected by persons who stay longer with. In addition, teachers are more knowledgeable and have significant crucial information to tell students which would attract them. The teacher by teaching can shape the students' mind and behavior. I personally influenced by my chemistry teacher at high school. I decided to participate at chemistry Olympiad when I was seventeen and also I consider his lifestyle as my model. My teacher always inclined to do exercise and after I had class with him I always do exercise.
There is a statistical research to approve my reasons. It indicates that children always imitate their teacher's actions and even want to be teacher in future which suggests that this hypothesis might be true and children are more influenced by their teacher rather than friends
To summarize my points and reasons, I believe that teachers are more influential as their age are more than students and they spend more time with students. In addition teachers with extensive vast experience and valuable knowledge would excite more their students’ curiosity; hence, the students attract more to their teacher and get more influenced form their teacher.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, second, so, third, for instance, i think, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2105.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2103960396 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77265180461 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487623762376 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.2581023186 48.9658058833 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6818181818 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.644230280473 0.236089414692 273% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198540697475 0.076458572812 260% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.209865950226 0.0737576698707 285% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.443911243597 0.150856017488 294% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126415335435 0.0645574589148 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.