You work for an international company and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
say how your work could be done while you are away
ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Simith,
I am writing to inform you that I am interested to work for a half year in the company's head office which is located in Germany.
As you know, Germany's head office has signed a contract for a new computer software design project with France. I would like to be part of this project team to improve my software engineering skills. Additionally, I think this experience will help me to develop my French that I have been learning for 3 months.
During my absence, my assistant Rıdvan will manage my responsibilities and will give me daily reports of work done. Furthermore, I will arrange a Skype meeting with my team to check the completed missions and to plan weekly progress.
I would be grateful if you could help me to plan my transference to the head office.
I look forward to a positive reply from you.
Yours sincerely,
Darla
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, so, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 740.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80519480519 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77755897641 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6246230752 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205621406525 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775148026904 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704278585499 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090602856916 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783475817697 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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